This is my third piece still in progress. The idea is the movement of nerve signals sent throughout the body. It still needs work but for right now I am content. I just need some time to step away from it and then figure out what its missing.
i'm not sure what it is about this piece but i really like it. I think i may in part owe my appreciation to human phys. but i love how free it is, and yet i feel like it absolutely represents what you were going for.
Maybe if you darkened the contour lines to make them more noticeable, it would unify everything a bit more? I love the lines, and i think that they relate well to nervous system theme, but they fade a lot into the background (at least in this photo). The yellower areas behind the right profile turned out amazing, though... very "yummy" as ms mcbride would say
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i'm not sure what it is about this piece but i really like it. I think i may in part owe my appreciation to human phys. but i love how free it is, and yet i feel like it absolutely represents what you were going for.
Maybe if you darkened the contour lines to make them more noticeable, it would unify everything a bit more? I love the lines, and i think that they relate well to nervous system theme, but they fade a lot into the background (at least in this photo). The yellower areas behind the right profile turned out amazing, though... very "yummy" as ms mcbride would say
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